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12-16-2003, 10:29 PM,
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Okay just a few things, I thought this would be fun, it doesn't matter if you suck or not. 1.) If your gonna diss other people, as in a little rap war, keep it pg-13 and no low blows. 2.) Just have fun, I havnt seen anyone do a thread like this before so I thought itd be interesting. 3.)Everyone chip in, and try to keep it strictly to this or relating to this. 4.) Be original; no stealing.
Ahem,
Your man Trippy is in the house
Busting around, moving silently as a mouse
You dont see me until its too late
Till im impregnating your hot new date
Oh whats that did I score with your wife?
My bad, didn't mean to ruin your life

All these sucka MC's don't know what their doin
They think their hot new rhymes are the best things brewin
The sucka MC's fall of the mic
Quicker than Rosie O Donnel goes down on a Dyke.

Allright thats all i can think of for now, pretty out of it cus of Pneumonia medicine, heh I had fun with that though.
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12-17-2003, 01:13 AM,
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OK I decided that I will try a little "free-styling." Keep in mind that I have never done this before so please go easy on me.

WTF its Apex
Thinks like a T-Rex
Moves like a vortex
Kill’s like he’s mindless
He has no kindness

Matter of fact he’s more complex
With some quick ass reflex
Doesn’t flex his pec’s
Like he’s desperate for sex
So you better not vex
If y’all wanna keep your necks.

Please tell me what you think of it:)
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12-17-2003, 05:41 AM,
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I'm a wreck
with no f uckin' neck
I've seen the way i came to be
I can't break loose but I gotta get free

This life is a joke
So I'll take a toke
Left alone with nothing but thoughts
I find myself surrouned by bots

When nothing's real
What should i feel
I'm a f uckin' wreck
With nothin' left...



(ps. . sorry for swearing I felt it added to the emotion within my "freestyling" if any admin finds it inappropriate then you may delete but please don't replace it with emoticons and such, I don't want this to turn into a joke)
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12-17-2003, 06:31 PM,
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haha yeah keep it live, bbl gotta get my smoke on with home boys. Literally.
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12-17-2003, 06:49 PM,
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Translated: This is enjoyable....let us continue to rap. I have to leave now gentlemen....I have to smoke
a marijuana cigarette with my closest friends."
(This post was last modified: 12-17-2003, 06:49 PM by PIX.)
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12-17-2003, 06:56 PM,
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Pix definitely has a fix on the situation
Sitting here waiting for my cell phone vibration
So i can meet em at the nearest location
Shit, I just got on my vacation
And when I get high, im gonna play Playstation

Thats right, just outta school now
We can chill, take the peace pipe in the pow-wow
Bustin rhymes on fake lil bow-wows
And when ya get lit, you gotta get some chow now

When im drunk as a skunk
all i want is girls
Sweet PT
More Whiskey
Even if i hurl, i still want the girl
I want her rocking on my lap
So i can take a nap
Uh oh, she didnt cum?
Thats not cool, then she aint having fun
But if she wasnt hot, she shouldve said so
Not at the end, but at the start of the get-go

She knows me im just trying to bust a rhyme
All the mean while, waitin till im in my prime
Whats this, am i outta time?
I hear the phone ringin
I know what news this will be bringin
15 minutes later, my brain will be stingin

Peace Peace Peace
hah.
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12-17-2003, 08:42 PM,
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In tribute to the kings of Hip-Hop of all time, I changed my avatar to a Run-DMC pic.
Rest in Peace Jam Master Jay, that was a pointless murder of a great man.
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12-17-2003, 09:06 PM,
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Probably for the better, I didn't get my weed
Sweet cheebah leaf isnt what I need
All I need is the sweetest girl on planet Earth
Maybe one day, I could help someone give birth
Not like we need three more Trippy's
Running around, stumbling on there ABC's
While im chilling in the bathroom splitting up my LSD
Thats definitely not the way to be,

In my serene fantasy world
Im just surrounded by intoxicating girls
All they wanna do is love my dong
Cus its better than King Kong's own shlong
All night long, back and forth in the corner

Do i want girls like that? No, i just wanna learn her
Find the dream girl who will take care of you if your ill
Who stands beside you when your addicted to a pill
And all she wants to do with you is chill
All she needs is your dedication
Not a Harvard diploma graduation
Not a pretty guy with blonde hair and blue eyes
Someone who will chill with her and stare at the sky
Do such people exist for people like me?
For those who abuse everything else including THC
One day I hope i look back on this with her and laugh
While im sitting there, listening to Aftermath
Maybe one day dreams will not just be a hope
Maybe one day ill get off the pills and off the dope
Then maybe, just maybe, hapiness will find me
In a dark corner outside of a KFC

That was weird man, i just woke up so i dunno. Next time ill make a "party rap".
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12-17-2003, 09:33 PM,
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Trippy knows the deal
When your world is upside down
nice to find someone you feel for
Who can take away that frown

When the stuation is tough
You gotta fight through the rough
You gotta know the right stuff
You gotta show enough

Turnin' to the right mix
to get the right fix
aint the best thing
to make ya feel like a king

Sometimes it's the only answer you can think of
If your downed and draining your own blood
You gotta loose this violent circle
When the smoke's so thick the blue turns purple

The answer isn't always clear
the thought of which can invoke fear
To those who can't find their way
Just sit tight through the ride, and stay
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12-17-2003, 09:55 PM,
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Allright allright, theres a party tonight
There aint gonna be no fights
Cus im invited
So ladies get excited
I keep the quality and quanity under control
If you gonna start shit your gonna pay the toll
Not under this roof, not under this house
They gotta be more silent than a hair louse
If they think they are gonna start a riot
Guess what Trippy's gonna make em Quiet,

Won't dont it if i dont have to
But some situations make you do things you dont wanna do
Like beating some guy whos been drinking too much brew
Trying to rape a girl half his size i wont stand for that
***I'm Stupid for Swearing*** Rapist gonna see my Gat
If he don't stop before it's too late
He won't even have a chance at another date
Three bullets is all it takes
For the Reaper to come and take what I make
Another dead body, a soulless entity
But now at least there will be serenity,

So who cares if another bad man is in the ground
Hes rolling in his grave, just rolling around
Reflecting on his mistakes without making a sound,

They did an autopsy right before putting him under
Smart doctors realised he made a pretty bad blunder
He screwed with the wrong people at the wrong place
His punishment for that was three slugs in his face
In the end it was his end and I didn't make haste
I knew I made the right decision to save a poor girl
Rapists like that make want to hurl
No regrets here excepting for wasting some ammo
On a pretty big lame-o
What a waste of a human being
If only the cops had seen what I had been seeing

But now im in the cell
Being sentenced to hell
Condemned by those who don't even know what to tell
Screaming for mercy, just a quick death
Give me a final breath
I think I deserve that for saving a life
But ending one at the same time
No one cares though; life is just so sublime
Im in chamber now, there about to inject the needle
I wish I was at home, just listening to the beatles
But death for me is about to return
And all I can see is the young girl I saved on the side
My last words were "God See it my way"
Right before they put me down and away
The girl still standing, looking tortured, just heaved and sighed
"There are no heroes left in this country"
"Just Murder for Murder and things are not they way they should be"

Okay that wasn't a party rap at all, I always change at the last minute since I make all of this up as I go along. Got kinda dark, okay next time a happy Run-DMC kinda style.
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12-17-2003, 11:31 PM,
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yall think your rimes are icy
but there really kinda dicy
this weed aint spicy
smokes bomb and nicey
but thats alrighty
im the all mighty with a freestyly
am i blazed? highly

wtf im a writing??:wacko:
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12-18-2003, 03:33 PM,
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Blazed you left me quite amazed
That you can write anything in a state so dazed
Put down the chronic
It aint the tonic
Unless it is just that bubonic
Alcopolco Gold, Purple Haze, or "G-13" is what i mean.
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12-18-2003, 09:41 PM,
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Here's what a very intelligent black journalist said on PMSNBC today about today's Rhyming and Rapping.

COMMENTARY
By Darrell Bowling
MSNBC
Updated: 11:48 p.m. ET Dec. 17, 2003"Y'all gonna make me lose my mind up in here, up in here." That's a DMX song and that's how I felt during a week in early December when I was overwhelmed by negative images of black men in the media. It hit me with many different emotions: sadness, embarrassment and anger.


But these emotions flow through me quite often. Why? I'm a journalist. An African-American journalist. I constantly see negative stories about black men. I hate it, yet I love my job because of the incredible possibility of greatness that journalism holds every single day.

That week in early December was particularly painful. There was a seemingly endless stream of stories about men of color allegedly doing bad things: a Cincinnati black man caught on videotape as he fought police and later died at their hands; Michael Jackson's alleged sexual abuse of children; a Hispanic man arrested for allegedly abducting a white college student; Barry Bonds appearing before a grand jury investigating steroids. A media crime parade of men of color.

"Are there any positive stories on black men?" I screamed. I got my answer. The Grammys nominated 50 Cent for top rap artist of the year, a story that MSNBC.com put on its cover.

That struck a raw nerve. I blew up in my newsroom, wanting to know why were we promoting more negative images of black men. Moreover, why did the Grammys give a nomination to music that is misogynistic, racially stereotypical and dripping with self-hatred?

Hip hop forever
Many popular rap music videos promote greed, hedonism and violence. Why is it OK that the most popular rap features young black men, for the most part, celebrating the "thug life" and "keeping it real"? With all the different forms of rap music out there, why is this version so popular, particularly with white kids?

Black men put black women in videos and call them '***I'm Stupid for Swearing***es and hos,' promote drugs, sex, drinking and high-priced luxury items. If they were 'keeping it real,' they wouldn't be able to afford these things, at least not in the St. Louis neighborhood where I grew up.




Why were blacks willing to raise a ruckus and boycott a company that sold the game Ghettopoly (created by a Asian-American) because it "promoted negative images," but not protest when record companies and rappers promote the same negative images the board game touts?

These are tremendously important questions, and they must be examined and answered.

Hip hop has changed America forever. It has influenced nearly every aspect of American cultural life. You can't turn on the TV and not see the trappings of hip hop - dress, language and attitude - in everything from commercials to news shows to sports.

Black American music has been the heartbeat of our country. Our music gives America its groove. It has been tossed, turned, co-opted and stolen by others. There was even a time when blacks rarely got credit from the media - or the proceeds from sales and royalties.

Now, it's happening again. Our culture is being stolen again, only this time it's by young black men who are promoting racist stereotypes of our people simply to make money.

Black men put black women in videos and call them "***I'm Stupid for Swearing***es and hos," and promote drugs, sex, drinking and high-priced luxury items. If they were "keeping it real," they wouldn't be able to afford these things, at least not in the St. Louis neighborhood where I grew up.

Following our lead
White kids historically have followed black culture's lead and they continue to do so, not surprisingly. Because of the theme of gangsta rap, what is troubling now is the almost voyeuristic, horror movie feel to it. Let's be realistic. If a group of white kids saw 50 Cent and his G-unit walking behind them on a street, those kids would be as scared as if it was Jason wearing a hockey mask and carrying a chainsaw.

Even I provoke fear in white people when I walk down the streets of Seattle. And certainly none of these brothers, acting and dressing as they do in their videos, would be welcome in white neighborhoods.

So rappers offer white people a safe look at how young black men think, feel and behave. Then whites take that behavior and imitate it. They never have to venture out of their neighborhoods to meet a real "thug."


Black kids actually see themselves in these rappers. What is so frightening to me is that black children are imitating and emulating these negative role models. The anti-social behavior they glorify is one of the reasons why more black men are in prisons than in colleges.

In reality, what we actually get from popular rappers is cartoon characters behaving badly and living down to the expectations of what mainstream society perceives blacks to be.

Chuck D once called rap the CNN of the streets. It still is, but the mainstream is only seeing the make-believe, seedy side of rap music. And it seems that the music industry and the media are only interested in making money by pushing trash to our kids.

Enough's enough
Great rappers tell stories - Tupac, Biggie, Mos Def, Common, Chuck D and Naz. Jay Z was "Big Pimping" but he also told us "it's a hard knock life."

At this point in the pop rap business, all you need is a great producer - Dr. Dre, Jermaine Dupri, Pharrell. They come up with the phat beats, you drop the"f"bombs, say the "n" word, talk about jackin' people up, screwing women, how much money you have, cars, diamonds, mug for the camera, grab your crotch and there you have it - an instant hit.

If popular rappers really want to "keep it real," they need to tell the truth. Nobody parties 24/7 - try talking about real experiences, love, pain, sorrow, happiness.

And black people have to stand up and say we have had enough with popular rap music. It has gone too far. I'm not the only person saying this. Spike Lee said at a college recently: "We buy all this stuff (rap music), not even thinking about what's behind it. ... Think about the power that we have. We can't just sit back and think it doesn't affect us. We have to do something about it. We have to be more choosy about the types of stuff we support."

USA Today once called Eminem the new Bob Dylan. Well, I want to know where the Curtis Mayfield of popular rap music is? And why isn't he getting a Grammy?

Word....
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12-18-2003, 10:38 PM,
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That is the best f'ing freestyle I've seen in this thread yet
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12-18-2003, 10:42 PM,
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My name is MaGoo
and I like to chew
three bowls of stew
that is fun to brew
with my spoon brand new
that tastes like glue
when I've got the flu

... I know, ownage. ;P
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12-19-2003, 11:41 AM,
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Your simple words just don’t move me
You’re minor, we’re major
You all up in the game and don’t deserve to be a player
Don’t make me have to call your name out
Your crew is featherweight
My gunshots’ll make you levitate

In the spirit of contemporary rap I just borrowed someone elses lyrics.
-Sockhole
"If ya SMELL ... what the SOCK ... is cookin."
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12-19-2003, 01:19 PM,
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owwww i cant do that in english :huh: i ll do that in french

houda rapide comme le puma
vien foutre la dawa dans vadavaka
pure style de terroriste celui qui fume ces sticks comme un T.O.X
reviens chez grits pur vocal
avec un rap bancal pour les chacals
houda mon nom t'évoque le format
formater ton dique dur : cheval de troie (oups je part en shweps là)

sry if you don t understand:P ^^
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12-19-2003, 05:53 PM,
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ok I know my french is bad.... so you have to translate because I get something about Houda being fast
and staying up till dawn in vadavaka, terrorizing or smoking with a very vocal GRITS
something about rap and your name evoking decaps
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12-19-2003, 08:11 PM,
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ok.. I tried to translate it:

houda fasts like the puma
come muddling at vadavaka
terrorist pure style the one that smoke theses sticks like a drug-addict
come back at grits' pure vocal
with a bandylegged rap for the jackals
houda my name evoke the format
format your hard disc : trojan
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12-20-2003, 08:35 AM,
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I prefer it in french but good job chent :blink:
it s hard to translate my stupids words -_-
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12-20-2003, 11:38 AM,
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it definitely flows better in french...just wanted to make sure I understood it ;)
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12-20-2003, 11:55 AM,
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I've never been much into rap
So much of it is strictly crap
When it delves into your heart
it allows you to share that part
That part of you that is more than a player
That part of you that makes you want to stay here

We all share a special connection
both the steam and the won fraction
we meet on the forums
to banter and rap
we meet in game
to push and decap

forgive the rappin noobie
you dont like it? so sue me
I gave it a shot
you cant ask a lot
hey Im a girl at least I have
brains ;)
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12-20-2003, 12:24 PM,
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i liked it, was more poetic then most rap. I might do one later. But it will be short, because its free, and no downloading of :P
Track 1337 in my winamp playlist:
Lamb of God - Laid to Rest
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12-21-2003, 11:15 PM,
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Now this girl she was crazy
And just a little bit hazy
Met a guy in the corner and got a bit LAZY
He was excited with a full erection
She wasnt bearing any kind of contraception
Dumb ***I'm Stupid for Swearing*** you gotta use protection
She ended up getting a C-Section
Before the 2004 Election

Had to give the child up for adoption
This shouldnt have to be a negelectfull option
Kids gonna grow up
With no real parents to show up
Poor kid will probably blow up
All he hears is "Shut up"
Still gotta get up

Go to school
Like the corporate tool
Foster parents take him for a fool
Even though they got 2 benze's and a pool
Me, I think the kids pretty cool

Getting through life working loung hours
All he gets from his workers is glours
Just trying to fight off the powers
of Tempation
In the United States- a drug filled nation
Dont succumb to the evil sensation
Your body feals like constant vibration
Then it switches to a bloated inflation
All of a sudden you wind up in an alley
With a skanky ass girl named Halley
You can just add her to to the talley
Of girls you banged while you were drunk
Passed out like a skunk
Smelling like funk

Trippy tries to stay away from that now
Ive got goals-holy shit wow
Quickening man dont have a cow
dont be so surprised
that im energized
to get by in life
Get a wonderfull life
Just make some money
So i can spend on my sweet honey
If she tells me that i cant rap
Just what ***I'm Stupid for Swearing*** i dont give a crap
All i want is her on my lap
Doing our thang then well take a nap

STOP- This is history in motion
Im not trying to cause a comotion
Non-stop locomotion
For Trippy's future isnt bleak
Im the polar opposite of weak
For the ladies me they should seak
Cus i aint no freak
Girls they just wanna love my smile
Putting on the charms all the mean while
But guess what i dont have a tile
Of course ive with ive scored
most of them were college whores
So anyway have fun with this beat
Hopefully itll kick you off your feat
Put you and your girl in the good mood
Get you and girl some food
Go back to her place
Dont be selfish, use your face
Out of your kidness give her some head
Kiss and cuddle and go to bed
Dont worry about getting off
Dont be so soft

Cus all you need is your girl to love you.

Yeah, just took my night-time meds though itd have some fun. Sorry if there was some profanity, trying to make it up as a go a long all night long. Next time i'll reply to some of the lies, make up a good story just make sure not to keep it boring
-Your man in parting, Trippy.
P.S. Im not inactive, i have SEVERE Pneuomnia so Im not on very much.
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